RetiredExplorer
05-08-2006, 09:50 AM
A WIP my first Fanfiction all critisms welcome :)
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It'd seemed like hours since the scaley beasts had finally given up persuit yet he could still hear the hissing and growls of them all around him. He was lost stranded in a dense jungle full of unknown reptillian terrors, lustria was no place to be on your own with out a guide or map, Explorers tell stories about these lands in every tavern in the old world,
telling tales of huge beasts bigger than any animal known to man,giant carnivorous beast that could swallow a orge in one gulp. He tried to put such tales out of his mind and find somewhere to set up camp.
The sky started to darken and he had found the perfect clearing, confident his pursuers had given up he started a fire and sat down beside it opening his backpack.
He looked at his loot it was truly the most amazing thing he had ever seen this will make him a very wealthy man if he sold it to the right collector, it was a orb about the size of an mellon and made of a black stone, the moon reflected off of its surface which was scored with symbols and hieroglyphics which seemed to depict some ancient war between lizardmen and horrifying mutated armies of chaos.
He had found the orb deep in a wet cave its only guardian seemed to be a old bloated frog looking creature who was covered in the most amazing golden trinkets, Thankfully the frog creature was asleep or hibernating either way it hadnt looked like it had moved in a very long time, he crept up to grab the orb but as soon as he had laid a single finger on it the creatures eyes suddenly opened, it was awake and let out a vile roar!, thats when he ran occasionally turning around to see the screaming hordes of lizardmen chasing him.
He soon fell asleep with the orb close to his chest and his single shot pistol underneath his makeshift pillow ready to be drawn at the first sound of trouble,
His sleep was restless and disturbed, his dreams plagued by images of a war fought between two savage races one side clearly lizard men yet the other side seemed more vague deffinatley not human and deffinatley not of this earth. He awoke a few hours later to the sound of some mystery bird screeching and cackling doing some sort of bizarre mating call which drowned out all other noises of the jungle, he decided to eat something before he moved on and found some interesting star shaped fruit which he tucked into realising he hadnt eaten for a couple of days. After about fifteen minutes the bird had finally stopped its singing and the jungle returned to quiet but it seemed just a bit too quiet with no background noises of even insects chittering away, it was then he heard the voice.
"Bring it to me" the voice whispered.
"Who's there! Where are you?" he shouted defiantly.
"Bring it to me!" The voice screamed only this time it sounded more like voices as if there was a army shouting it all at once.
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Thats pretty much it for now i know my grammer sucks pretty bad but i wanted to write a story anyway and this is my idea so far if people are interested i will finish it off
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It'd seemed like hours since the scaley beasts had finally given up persuit yet he could still hear the hissing and growls of them all around him. He was lost stranded in a dense jungle full of unknown reptillian terrors, lustria was no place to be on your own with out a guide or map, Explorers tell stories about these lands in every tavern in the old world,
telling tales of huge beasts bigger than any animal known to man,giant carnivorous beast that could swallow a orge in one gulp. He tried to put such tales out of his mind and find somewhere to set up camp.
The sky started to darken and he had found the perfect clearing, confident his pursuers had given up he started a fire and sat down beside it opening his backpack.
He looked at his loot it was truly the most amazing thing he had ever seen this will make him a very wealthy man if he sold it to the right collector, it was a orb about the size of an mellon and made of a black stone, the moon reflected off of its surface which was scored with symbols and hieroglyphics which seemed to depict some ancient war between lizardmen and horrifying mutated armies of chaos.
He had found the orb deep in a wet cave its only guardian seemed to be a old bloated frog looking creature who was covered in the most amazing golden trinkets, Thankfully the frog creature was asleep or hibernating either way it hadnt looked like it had moved in a very long time, he crept up to grab the orb but as soon as he had laid a single finger on it the creatures eyes suddenly opened, it was awake and let out a vile roar!, thats when he ran occasionally turning around to see the screaming hordes of lizardmen chasing him.
He soon fell asleep with the orb close to his chest and his single shot pistol underneath his makeshift pillow ready to be drawn at the first sound of trouble,
His sleep was restless and disturbed, his dreams plagued by images of a war fought between two savage races one side clearly lizard men yet the other side seemed more vague deffinatley not human and deffinatley not of this earth. He awoke a few hours later to the sound of some mystery bird screeching and cackling doing some sort of bizarre mating call which drowned out all other noises of the jungle, he decided to eat something before he moved on and found some interesting star shaped fruit which he tucked into realising he hadnt eaten for a couple of days. After about fifteen minutes the bird had finally stopped its singing and the jungle returned to quiet but it seemed just a bit too quiet with no background noises of even insects chittering away, it was then he heard the voice.
"Bring it to me" the voice whispered.
"Who's there! Where are you?" he shouted defiantly.
"Bring it to me!" The voice screamed only this time it sounded more like voices as if there was a army shouting it all at once.
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Thats pretty much it for now i know my grammer sucks pretty bad but i wanted to write a story anyway and this is my idea so far if people are interested i will finish it off